The bit with the landlady was super sad and I wasn't expecting it to be that sad. :|
My bad? :/
The governor is an asshole. >.>
Good, he's an antagonist ;)
Also, what does the token thing mean? I mean, I get the gist of it, but...? ^.-
I was like, "What's a shorthand way of saying, 'I'll give you this thing to prove I'mma do this other thing'?" and my brain went with token. There's probably a better way of describing it or a better word, but honestly when I was editing my brain glossed right over it :P
I like the title. I think it's fitting. Also, that was a very nice troll there at the end. XP
I really enjoyed this chapter. I don't know what else to say about it really. Adaellae has a very strong personality and it shows. The narrative felt very concise which seems to fit her as the focus of the chapter and the situation overall. Good stuff. :)
And about linking the story instead of posting. Welp, it's up to you. I'll follow along whatever you decide. ^^
@typical_demigod I juuusssst fixed it. It was some formattting from italics that didn't transfer over.
Also the good news is that since Sam and I aren't going to be posting public chapters anymore and instead sending them straight to you, there's going to be less annoying format fiddling to do to make it appear correctly here.
We have about up to chapter 7 or 8 written and we're working on getting those edited. More to come for you two (and whoever else wants to can PM me) soon.
Idk what that trope is called where they talk about their family and show off pictures in a war film and then die, but I can see the similarities now that you say that. Anyway, time will tell if he does or doesn't die.
Well, it's not the bubonic plague :P Anyway, it swept through the world some 15-20 years ago and while a lot of people made full recoveries, there were some left with lingering breathing problems or other maladies. In terms of hallucinations, I'm debating if there may be lasting psychological issues, but it's certainly a myth. It's just, was it a coincidence with a notable person, or an actual thing? It could go either way and I'm leaving myself room to decide.
I have notes on more details about the plague but I haven't looked at them in ages so my memory is faint. I'm thinking on going into more depth later, but we'll see if that happens.
We're working on Chapter 4 guys :D We've just been busy and our schedules have been hectic lately
<3 thanks so much for reading! Even if you can't give feedback all the time it's nice just to know someone actually wants to read it, lol
@typical_demigod I was thinking so myself. I'll go through eventually and rewrite it more novel perspective-I was thinking once we finish the first book I'll do that, just one fell swoop of fixing the POV
It's because we rp to write it, then edit and fix it to make a story format
Hey guys, just letting everyone know I am working on a zombies world, and I can say I am really excited because it is really original and I am completely sucked into it. As soon as I move it to plotist, I'll put the link here! :D
I'm working on a zombie thing too. A series of 4 short stories for a Horror showcase. It's fun!